What my partner James thought:
My friend liked how my flower was drawn and my bird.
My friend didn't like the tree because a real tree doesn't have zig- zag twigs.
My friend said I could improve on making it better and more colourful.
My friend said that I could have made my grass bigger because he said that all he could see was blue sky.
He said that I could draw the bird bigger and practice the colours in my art book before I put it on the good copy.
If you are interested in art, you could come to Waikowhai Primary Schools special "ART SHOW". Every class in the school has a piece of art to show. So come along and enjoy your time looking at our artwork.
Opening night : 6:15-8;15 Tuesday night 26th June.
This is my piece of art I think I did a good job. keep scrolling down to see my friends artwork
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This is James' artwork
Kia ora Richard,
ReplyDeleteThis blogpost really stood out to be as a good quality blogpost. You have gone into real detail about your art task and reflected really well. I like how you have shared James feedback as well. Both of you are really talented artists, I like the bold colours and the backgrounds you have used. I would love to check out your art show if I lived in Auckland. Maybe you can post some photos of the art show for those of us who aren't able to make it. Will all the students have art on display at the show?
Tania